My dream holiday is to got to dreamland, Australia, wild water world to go and see my uncle and to take him on a relay relay long break because he has worked really hard since i was born. want to take him to go and play netball when i took him there and he was shocked he didn't even know that we were coming here and i said how Cares nobody will notice that there is only one boy there with lots and lots of girls.
After all that has finished we went to the movies and watched the poss in boast it was so cool i never watched something like that in my (LIFE). Well when the movie finished we went home and had so ice cream and then we just fell asleep really fast so then in the afternoon we watched the sunset go down when its Nelly half way down we went back inside and had a big rest for the next day which I can’t waite for.
After all that has finished we went to the movies and watched the poss in boast it was so cool i never watched something like that in my (LIFE). Well when the movie finished we went home and had so ice cream and then we just fell asleep really fast so then in the afternoon we watched the sunset go down when its Nelly half way down we went back inside and had a big rest for the next day which I can’t waite for.
Hey Katrina,
ReplyDeleteYour dream holiday sounds brilliantly exciting. I hope one day you get to accomplish your dream holiday. One little tip, remember when you a writing, that you check your punctuation and basic skills. For example, check your capital letters and commas. But besides that, KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
-Sylvia
Sup Katrina you have a nice writing about your dream about going to dream land it sounds really exciting, KEEP UP THE COOL WORK!
ReplyDelete